*This is a poem free of rhyme and I really hope you like it as much as I loved penning it. Happy readin’!
Gasping
By Meher Gandhi
Words like volcanoes are trying to burst,
Out of my heart that’s pumping,
Blood and syllables, all the same.
It feels like my only breath is trapped,
In the web of speechlessness and sleeplessness.
I’ve written and erased and written and thrown,
With my fingers trembling,
Under the weight of committing the sin,
Of being unable to let my words live.
The page is gasping,
For the same breath I seek.
The strings are piling up inside me,
With every storm and every rainbow I see,
With every fine particle of sand I walk on,
With every vein of fresh leaf I see,
With every drop of rain that falls,
And every little butterfly I see.
Something is furiously twisting and turning inside me,
Like the dangerously silent whirlwind,
That’s on it’s way to the empty land,
Of unsaid words and empty promises.
The wind hasn’t stopped blowing,
The words never stop flowing,
In this river that flows like my life,
And my life that goes with the wind.
You could probably see the adrenaline rush being reflected in this poem of mine. Trust me, my hands were shaking while typing this because I was so desperate to get my words right in front of me, just the way they felt. It feels great to finally have penned down each and every bit of feeling! Not to mention, this is my first time writing and sharing a poem free of rhyme!
Do you like this poem of mine? Do let me know by commenting below! Don’t forget to like and share!
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With love,
Meher
I love the poem. This is a great example of how an amazing poem can be written without rhymes. That’s what I try to do too. I do have rhymes in my poem, but these rhymes flow naturally. So I don’t focus on rhyming too much. Check out my work when you get the chance!
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So glad to know that you like my poem!
Most of my poems have a rhyme scheme. I just wanted to try something different and voilà!
Will definitely check out your poems!
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Ohh I can imagine each and every word you wrote 😀😀😀there is only one word I can say for it is profound 🖤🖤🖤🖤
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Yay! Thanks so much!! 💖💖
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The pressure is all mine 😇😇😇
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Reblogged this on Sizzles And Frizzles and commented:
It truly gave me goosebumps! I am literally in loss of words!! Sheer excellence 👌🏻👏🏻
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Gosh! What did I just read!! It was nothing but pure excellence..!! With every post of yours, you are reaching for the zenith of success! Wish you all the love, luck and fame! You deserve every bit of it Meher. Rise and shine!!
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Hurray! Thank you so so much!
It always feels great to know that you like my poems!
Thank you very much for reblogging my poem on your blog! Mighty kind of you! 💖💖
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I did it with my whole heart❤️ you deserve much more❣️
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I really like it…A poem doesnt necessarily need to rhyme. Do check out mine they are all without rhymes. I personally like this one a lot since it is on womanhood – https://manasmukul.wordpress.com/2018/09/22/she-can-be-forever/
#ContemplationOfaJoker #Jokerophilia
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Great work Meher…Loved every word of it. I too write poems and it is not necessarily to have theme. Check other forms of it on my blog.#msarorasays
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Rhyme*
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Wow how beautifully you have written this, I too try to write sometime, but writing poem us quite difficult for me 🙈
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woohoo ! to write a poem and to pen down our thoughts in a rhyme way, is not at all easy. Kudos to u and congrats for such a great talent. Hoping to read more now !
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It doesn’t have to rhyme but just touch our hearts… which yours did! I’m in loss of words
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To write a Poem is something which i try writing always. Learning from u all. Nicely written
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Meher, you have penned a poem straight from heart that has reached readers heart in bull’s eye manner. I love the non rhyming poetry too, where concentration in thoughts and not actually in rhyming.
Cheers
MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts
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Beautiful heartfelt poem. I like the simplicity with which you have penned down your thoughts. Keep writing poems, I know it’s not that easy.
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i really liked your poem Meher…keep it up!
do check out mine!!..
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