My mom and I have written a poem together! You guys have read my poems and you know what my style of writing is. This time, I decided to share with you a poem which my mother and I have written together! I am so excited to know what you guys think of our collective effort!
The stanzas in blue are my mom’s and the ones in black are mine. We’ve written the stanzas alternatingly, the first being mine, next being hers and so on (additional information if the colour isn’t showing up.).
The Golden Canvas
By Prerna and Meher Gandhi
I have been wandering in this forest alone,
Have traversed every puddle, every stone.
All the lights and crowds I’ve seen,
The desert is where I’ve never been.
It seems the path is taken less,
Or is it for the one to assess?
The lonesome stream, the hollow pit,
To make it meaningful, bit by bit.
I think of the golden shore of settled sand,
The holy waves of brown and gold.
The silent airy blow takes me to this land,
To live the stories never been told.
The fierce sun rays set ablaze,
The misty sand to sparkle away.
The mirage gives it to my gaze,
And I seek life out of astray.
I wish to befriend all the hovering vultures,
To never let go of the priceless junctures.
Every season that I would greet,
Would have me gazing at the sand’s and sun’s meet.
Yes, I yearn to traverse the desert land,
The forlorn canvas of the Mighty hand.
Sure it calls for all the celebration.
A plight to unravel the splendid jubilation.
We wrote this poem recently and I was so excited to write with her! She frames her words in a very beautiful manner! Let me know what you think of this poem of ours!
Also, huge thanks for the 600+ followers! I am so so so grateful! Thank you!
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With love,
Meher
This has come out Beautiful
Wonderfully written by Mother and Daughter
There is a Poet in both of you, more so in your mother.
Let she always be a Prerana to you Meher
Continue this combination and you both shall deserve Applause.
👌👍💞🌷👏
Shiva
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Thank you so very much! I am so happy to know that you like this poem of ours!😊
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Lovely! You are right, your mother has a beautiful way with words. I particularly enjoyed this line, “The mirage gives it to my gaze, And I seek life out of astray.” Thank you!
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Thank you so much, Ken! So happy to know that you like it!
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Very good
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Thank you!
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Splendid! So beautifully written!❤✨
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Thank you so much, Sann!💙
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You’re always welcome dear❤💫
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I’ve been super busy in January and still am but, I really do want to collaborate with you…shall we start with it in March, if that’s okay with you?
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Yes sure! Even my examination commences from end of February and will continue till mid March. Anytime after that will totally do❤👍
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Oh, ok!
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You can read my latest poem if you haven’t 😉 I ll be waiting for your response
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Hehe…I haven’t checked it out…will read it and let you know!
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I’m not sure, if I’m color blind or not, but I only see blank stanzas? And I like this!
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Oh, is the colour not showing up? It’s showing when I open the post and when I visit through the browser, too. Thanks for letting me know! I will try to make it right.
Glad that you like it!!
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Just black on the reader!
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Couldn’t do anything about the colour but, have now mentioned in the post that we’ve written the stanzas alternatingly, the first being mine and so on.
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Such a beautiful effort by you..❤
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Thanks a bunch! Glad you like it!💙
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❤❤
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The love it reflects. Such sweet gestures. Reminds me of my mother. Although she doesn’t writes she reads what I write and help me to make it look better. This is so gorgeously done. ♥♥ it’s indeed a blessing to read such poetry. Well done. 🙂
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I am so very glad to know that you like this poem! I showed this comment to my mother and she is so happy to know that you think so!
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I need to thank you more for writing this ❤ ❤ God bless you both. Would love to read more 🙂
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God bless you, too!💙💜
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Wow! It’s so beautiful!
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Pleased to know that you like it! Thank you!💙
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Yup! Someday, I would like my daughter and I to collaborate also like you ❤️
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You should surely do that because it is so much fun!❤
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Maybe when my daughter will take her summer vacation 😉. She’s so busy nowadays.
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So now we know where you get your poetic ability from 😉
Wonderful poem, by the way 👍
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Hehe…yes, you know it now! Thank you!😊
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You’re very welcome!
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Beautifully written! I absolutely loved this one 🙂
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Thanks a bunch, Riya!!💙
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Meherr this is amazingg!
Lovely work by both of you, loved it! ❤
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Thanks a lot, Shruti!❤
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Your mumma is really awsm in writing and this poem is amazing too…really loved it 💖
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Thank you very much! Will let her know that you appreciate her writing!💙
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I do loved both of you…💖
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Thank you! I am happy that you like the poem!💙
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This is so natural and beautiful!
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Thanks so much!😊
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I love collaborating with others! On a related note, here is a post I wrote about my mom yesterday:
https://ticktalksite.wordpress.com/2018/02/12/one-mother-in-a-million/
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Oh, great!
Will surely check it out!
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You and your mom both wrote a beautiful poem, Meher. 🙂
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So happy to know that you think so! Thank you!
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Wow!! That was an overdose of awesomeness 😇😇 loved it.. you both are so fantastic and so are your writings. Hungry for more.. keep feeding us with such beautiful words🙏
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Thank you soooooo much! We loved writing it as much as you loved reading it!
Thank ya!💜💙
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It’s very beautiful, unique and wonderful effort to bring the thoughts of two different persons together as poetry!!
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Thank you very much! Pleased to know that you like it!
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I really loved the Unique idea of bringing in your mother’s and thoughts as a poem, it’s a great effort!!
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Thanks a lot!😊
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Amazing jugalbandi of two beautiful poets,the stanzas seem to complement each other and only enhance the beauty of the whole piece. Would love to read more like this:)
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Haha…thank you so much! My mom and I feel great to know that people like this poem of ours!
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That is a really nice poem which your mom and you wrote, every time I read it it gets closer to my heart. I write poems too, I have them on my blog: elysianandcynosure.wordpress.com. (if you’d want to read them? :))
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Thank you so very much! Glad you enjoy reading our poem!
I will surely check out your poems!
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Such a beautiful poem your Mum and yourself created ☺️☺️ Lovely work dear. Have a great day x x
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Thank you very much! We’re happy to know that you like it!💙
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Beautiful collaboration! I love the alternating rhyming schemes.
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Thank you so much!!❤
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Lovely! It’s a good idea, that collaboration. It must have been fun! ^_^
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Thanks a ton, Ida! Yes, it was so so much fun! Trying to continue each other’s thoughts was such a nice experience!
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Beautiful poem, I love the collaboration!
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Thank you so much!
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That was an amazing combination. Nice to see your mother in your work. You surely got the talent from her. “The lonesome stream, the hollow pit,
To make it meaningful, bit by bit.” are my favorite lines. Well done.
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Yay! Thanks a bunch!
So happy to know that you like this poem of ours! And yes, I love those lines, too!
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I loved it. Amazing collab 💪😊
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Hurray! Thank you!💙
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You are welcome 🙂
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Wow! It’s just speechless and the most amazing part is that you wrote it with your mother which makes it more amazing.
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Thanks a lot! Writing with my mom was so much fun!
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So much love from me! This poem so touched, i like it.
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Thank you so much! Love to you, too!
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such well-written post!
Please do check our latest post on Wasai Wong Kadir https://wp.me/p92159-nA
Thank you!🌸
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Thank you very much! Will surely have a look at it!
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Beautiful poem ❤
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Thanks a lot!💙
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The poem is so beautiful, and the fact that you wrote it with your mother makes it even more so! Please keep writing!
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Thank you so much! I am extremely glad to know that you find it nice!
Will surely keep writing!💙
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I think this poem is awesome. I have been co writting some poems with my daughter. What a wonderful way to bound!
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Thank you very much!
Yes, it is a great way to spend some Mom-daughter time!
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This is so good. Your mother is really awesome!
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Thank you very much!!
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You’re welcome. Please check my new blog, I am a beginner. I appreciate your thoughts about my post.
https://selfnoted.wordpress.com
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Will check it out and let you know!
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Thank you so much!
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Wow. Awesome. Loved the way the poem was beautifully syncronised. Loved reading it.
I am relatively new to blogging. Love it when I come across blogs and posts like that of yours.
Just 3 posts old here. I am working on a series of 5 and the 4th post is on the way here.Would be glad if you could drop by my blog.
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Hi Meher,
wonderful poem, you are doing a great job .
” If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.” ― Emily Dickinson
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Thanks a ton, Ben!
I like that quote!
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Woah im a fan 🔥💘
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Haha thank you so much!!
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😃 pleasure
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Hi I just started with wordpress and I’m still trying to figure out how it works but it would be great if you could check out my latest post thankyou
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Hello! Welcome to WordPress! Will surely check out your post and will let you know!
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Means alot thankyou
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https://merakiforever.wordpress.com/2018/03/07/award-ceremony/
that was the most beautiful poetry!
you are awarded with this!!
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Oh, thank you so much!! Will surely post it, soon!
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Reblogged this on Bluebell For A While.
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Oh, thank you so much!!
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Wow this is so beautiful!
I’m new here and have no idea about this site but it would mean the world to me if you could just check it out and even guide me
Lots of love!
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Hi! Thank you very much!
Welcome to WordPress! I will surely check out your site and will let you know!
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Reblogged this on The Young Novelist.
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Oh, thank you so much for sharing our poem with your readers!
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A poet and her pen. See how it flows, I can feel how the ink flows, presenting in full the innermost expression.
I love this
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Damn. That was perfect. 😭❤️
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Thank you very much! Will have a look at it and let you know as required!
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I love this! The fact that you guys will have this memory together is even more priceless. Looking forward to
reading more that you put out!
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Thank you so much, Jay! Yes, we are glad to have written this together!
Pleased to know that you like it!
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Beautiful beautiful! Amazing work👏👏I can’t match your level but would mind reading my poems too? 🙂
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Thank you very much, Bani! Will check our your poems and let you know!
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Thanks Meher☺️❤️
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Have commented and followed you!
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Beautifully expressed!!!
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Thank you very much!
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Love it ❤
Hey, Do check out my poetry as well. A word of advice from you will be highly valued.
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Glad you did!
Will definitely check out your poems and let you know!
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Great❤️
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Thanks a lot!
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THIS IS VERY GOOD
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Oh, thank you so much!!
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